Raxus Prime

Hey guys!
This is my new Raxus Prime from Force Unleashed. Don't forget to comment!

Honestly, you just made a base, put on some bricks for a 'frame,' and then filled it up with random pieces.

Hey again Elite,

Glad to see you're already contributing - keep it up!

I'm not tremendously familiar with Raxus Prime or The Force Unleashed, but from what little I know, this appears to be a solid rendition of the junkyard duel. Your use of the scattered pieces gives it a genuine "trash planet" feel. Nice job posing the minifigs to capture a good sense of action too.

Good job with the photography. Both of the figures are decently in focus, and I'm glad to see you used the white background technique. One thing for the future: try to keep the whole image in focus next time (your back wall is a bit blurry ). I'd also like to see an angle where we can see both Starkiller and the alien's face (not as fun with Starkiller's back turned toward us, although it does provide a nice shot of the lightsaber).

I'm not sure how big your Lego collection is, but if your part selection will allow, I'd love to see you take this vignette and really expand it - with the idea of a junkyard planet, you could really go wild and build a cool large-scale scene.

Lastly, when you get a chance, click HERE to see another cool Lego rendition of the Raxus Prime scene!

Nice work bro - keep building and honing your skills, and welcome to the forum.

bl*c wrote:

Honestly, you just made a base, put on some bricks for a 'frame,' and then filled it up with random pieces.

I agree, though there is a lot of junk on Raxus Prime, it was more organized then you think, their were paths. So like Bl*c said, but the junk in specific areas.

Look at this for inspiration:

http://www.thecabg.net/clone-army-creations-f4/welcome-to-raxus-prime-t6655.htm

Notice how everything is attached. All these greebles are connected to either a stud or bar.
There is also a destroyed ship, something you could add to make this MOC sky rocket from where it is at the moment.

Also get rid of the wall; I don't think Raxus Prime had any buildings.

The MOC is quite basic, but the figures and background are great !

Thanks for everyones comments! Also bl*c I will take your advice. Thanks for your help, I will post a new version soon!